And just so you know, the page isn't an intro; it's meant to be the most in-depth publicly available overview of the cost-effectiveness of animal charities, so there's no need for comments of the type "this may turn off the average reader."
I think the basic structure is good and doesn't need improvement: What are the most important areas to work on, what do charities do in those areas, does it work, and what's the cost-effectiveness. I also don't think that the sections on the evidence of effectiveness of food industry politics & law and influencing companies and the like to buy more ethical food need more bullets (unless there's better evidence than what's already on the page). And finally, I picture that improvements to the page can be made as new sub-headings and new bullets.
The following questions are the ones I'm asking for help with (also available in the Remaining questions section of the page), but if you think of any other important improvements, feel free to suggest or edit.
- Are there any promising interventions that charities do on humane wildlife and pest control, does it work, and what's the cost-effectiveness? I would guess that cost-effective areas include pest control in agriculture, e.g. that crop farmers switch to a humane method to keep rodents away. But there could be other areas and I don't know if any charity is working on this). I would also guess that improving the methods to control the population of e.g. wolf in Scandinavia is not cost-effective, given the small number of wolves.
- Are there any promising direct actions that charities do in the food industry and to reduce wild animal suffering (and as usual, if so, do they work, what's the cost-effectiveness)? To clarify: examples of direct action in the food industry could be to rescue chickens or to physically obstruct whale hunters (but you need not include these two of course). I ask because direct actions are usually easier to evaluate than e.g. trying to pass legislation or changing consumer behavior, but I am not aware of many direct actions in the food industri and to reduce wild animal suffering, and I am not aware of any that seem cost-effective.
- Are there other areas that we have missed with likely cost-effectiveness competitive with those on the page (food industry, natural suffering in the wild, and wildlife and pest control)? I have in mind tangible areas like those on the page, or more tangible.
Thanks!
Simon